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Jolinar Memories

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Jolinar's Memories

[notes: to clarify, I've used Rosha to indicate Jolinar pre-Sam, Marty because it's easier to type, and Dad because that's what I call Jacob!]


Gate spinning, splashes into life, iris shuts. Jack and Sam walk into the Control room.

Sam; What's up?

Tech; Receiving GDO transmission, sir. It's the Tok'ra.

Jack; Open the iris. Maybe it's Dad.

Sam; Maybe.

Iris opens, Jack and Sam walk into Gateroom. Martouf and two other Tok'ra emerge.

Sam; Martouf. How are you?

Marty; Samantha. Colonel O'Neill. Well enough, under the circumstances.

Sam; what's wrong?

Marty; Maybe we should discuss this elsewhere.

Sam; It's my father.

Marty; I'm afraid he's been captured by Sokar.

Sam; Oh my God.

Marty; As far as we know he is still alive.

Sam; As far as you know?

Marty; You are familiar of how Sokar has assumed the persona of the entity known on Earth as the Devil.

Jack; Yeah. Bit pretentious, don't ya think?

Marty; You must understand when I say that if Selmak is still alive, he has been sent to hell.

Jack; As in...

Marty; A place of eternal suffering and damnation from which there is no return.



Richard Dean Anderson as Jack O'Neill
Michael Shanks as Daniel Jackson
Amanda Tapping as Sam Carter
Christopher Judge as Teal'c
Don S. Davis as General Hammond

Carmen Argenziano as Jacob/Selmak
JR Bourne as Martouf/Lantesh
William deVry as Aldwin [who doesn't actually appear
in this one, which shows that these credits are for
both eps]
Bob Dawson as Bynarr
Dion Johnson as Na'onak

Peter Williams as Apophis [I know that kinda spoils
the ending, but you should know that bit already]
Daniel Bacon as Technician
Eli Gabay as Jumar
Christine Kennedy as Young Samantha Carter
Peter Kent as Kin Tac (as Peter H. Kent)
Dillon Moen as Charlie O'Neill
David Palffy as Sokar
Tanya Reid as Jolinar/Rosha

Supervising Producer Robert C Cooper
Producer N John Smith
Written by Sonny Wareham and Daniel Stashower


Jack; So, what are we really talking about here?

Marty; Netu is a moon orbiting Sokar's home planet.

Jack; A very hot moon, I take it?

Marty; It is indeed a place where fire burns strong.

Sam; But you know for sure that my father is still alive?

Marty stops, and takes Sam's arm. [Oi! Marty! Hands off!]

Marty; I am sorry, Samantha. I know this must be difficult. Once captured, Selmak and Jacob your father would have been brutally tortured [tact, much?] But Sokar would rather see his victims suffer than die.

Jack; So we're talking about a rescue mission.

Marty; Unfortunately, to our knowledge, no one has ever escaped from Netu.

Jack; Oh.

Marty; No one except for Jolinar.

Sam; Oh.

Briefing Room

Daniel; Of course it makes sense. The Goa'uld impersonating the Devil would naturally create a place like Netu. Netu is from the book of Am-Taut which is kind of how-to guide to passage through the ancient Egyptian otherworld regions. And many of those regions are described as dark places with pits of fire home to hellish monsters and damned.

Marty; What little we know is largely based on the legends that have been perpetuated by Sokar himself.

Jack; How did Jolinar get out?

Marty; She never said.

Daniel; And no one ever asked her how she escaped from an inescapable prison?

Marty; She was found unconscious and badly injured in a Teltak, a cargo ship, floating in space. Her recovery was long and painful. She was encouraged to remember how she escaped but she refused to speak of it.

Jack; Anyone curious as to why?

Marty; I implored her but she would not say.

Sam; I only carried Jolinar for a short time. I've never had anything more than scattered flashes of her memories, occasionally some dreams, but never anything like this place you're describing.

Marty; The Tok'ra have technology that aids in the recall of memories, but you must be willing to use it.

Jack; If we're going in on this one, sir, we're going to need some more units.

Marty; A full military incursion will be impossible, Colonel O'Neill.

Jack; We do covert.

Marty; Selmak's recovery is obviously a high priority, however, and forgive me, Samantha, there is something larger at stake. The Tok'ra believe that Sokar is planning to launch a massive attack against the System Lords.

Jack; Isn't that good news?

Teal'c; The chaotic and feudal disorganisation of the System Lords' fragmented rule is a far more vulnerable target than that of one powerful Goa'uld.

Marty; Especially if that Goa'uld is Sokar.

Hammond; He's really that much worse than the others?

Daniel; Well, of all the gods he picked to impersonate he chose the Devil.

Marty; We need to find Selmak and determine what information he has gathered about Sokar's attack. Without wanting to sound overly-dramatic, the fate of the Galaxy might be at stake

Jack; Sounds a bit overly dramatic

Hammond; Sounds like we can't refuse. Colonel you have a go

Sam; When do we leave?

Marty; As soon as you are ready. If you are sure you are all sure you understand what you are volunteering for.

Daniel; You said hell, right?

Jack; Well, I'm gonna end up there sooner or later. May as well check out the neighbourhood.

end act one>

Control Room.

Marty; The Teltak we will require for our journey awaits us on the planet Vorash

Jack; Ship?

Marty; There is no Stargate on Netu. Those banished there are taken by ship

Jack; Have I mentioned to you that I hate surprises?

Marty; We have a long journey ahead of us. There will be much time to inform you of all the details.

Jack; Ah! Now that puts me in a position to be surprised.

Tech; Chevron seven is locked

Hammond; Major, you will bring your father back safely

Jack; Yes, sir. We will.

Vorash. They leave the Stargate and walk up to the Teltak.

Teltak. The rings engage and they're placed inside.

Sam; This ship looks familiar

Marty; This is the same Teltak that Jolinar was found adrift. It was severely damaged when we found it. Essential flight mechanisms have been repaired, however, the hyperdrive engines can only be run at 40% without too much risk.

Daniel starts playing with the console, and Jack indicates for him to stop. Teal'c sits in the pilot seat, and takes a look.

Teal'c; Is this vessel equipped with stealth capabilities?

Marty looks confused.

Sam; The ship we were in could make itself invisible

Marty; Really?

Jack; It was an upgrade. You're obviously dealing with your base model here.

Marty; Are you sure you can fly a ship such as this?

Teal'c; With great proficiency

Marty; While we are on the surface, you may have to avoid Sokar's forces

Daniel; Isn't Teal'c coming with us?

Marty; He cannot. The atmosphere around the moon is impenetrable by ship. The only way to reach the surface is in the descent pods. It is how all the damned are sent to sent to Netu by Sokar, and it how we must also arrive if we are to convince the Denizens we can be trusted

Sam; And there are only four pods

Jack; This counts as a surprise you know.

Marty; Shall we embark?

Jack; By all means. To hell with us.

FX shot of Teltak in hyperspace.

Inside. Teal'c is piloting. Marty walks into the back area

Daniel; So what else can you tell us about Netu?

Marty; The moon was once an industrialised colony of the planet Delmak. When Sokar conquered Delmak he made it his homeworld. He transformed the moon's environment to suit the myths.

Jack; sounds like he went to an awful lot of trouble

Mary; he filled the atmosphere with barely breathable toxins, then blasted numerous holes in the surface, releasing the molten core. As I apply the memory device, you will feel a slight pain

Sam; we've actually already experienced this technology before

Marty; good. Then you will know what to expect

Daniel; so we're actually going to see Jolinar's memories appear as... holographic images?

Marty; there are no specific way of targeting certain memories. Some of Samantha's personal memories may surface. Out of respect for her privacy we will not be using this part of the technology.

Sam; thank you

Marty; you can describe what you see

Sam; OK

Marty switches it on.


Cookies are being put on a plate

Cut back to Sam, then back into the flashback

Jacob walks into the house

Jacob; Sam?

Young Sam; In here

Cut to Sam, then back in

Jacob looks well unhappy

Young Sam; why are you crying?

Back to Sam, then back in

Young Sam; where's Mom?

Back to Sam

Sam; oh God...

Marty; listen to me, Samantha.

Sam; I'm sorry, I'm stuck in my own past

Marty; think of Jolinar. The last night we spent together before she was captured by Sokar. We walked along the ridge of Noctana. There were two moons out that night.


Marty and Jolinar/Rosha in front of a sunset. Rosha walks up to Marty. Some intense looks

Back to Sam

Sam; I see it


Rosha runs her hands up Marty's chest

Back to Sam

Sam; you didn't speak of Jolinar leaving. You both knew it was dangerous but she had to go


Rosha kisses Marty

Back to Sam

Sam; you stayed up all night together

FX shot of the Teltak in hyperspace.

Inside the ship, Jack and Daniel are asleep. Sam creeps over to Martouf and wakes him.

Sam; Martouf.

Marty; are you OK?

Sam; I want to try it again

Mary; I should have said this earlier. I know my relationship with Jolinar is a source of discomfort for you.

Sam; Martouf...

Marty; I would just like you to know that it has always been my belief that Jolinar kept her experiences from Netu a secret as she feared it would come between us. I do not want you to hold anything back for the same reason. You don't have to protect me.

He switches on the device.


Netu. Some red Jaffa walks over to Rosha and prods her with one of those electric cattle prod thingys.

Cut back to Sam.

Back into the flashback. Sokar laughs the Evil Laugh.

Back to Sam who throws her head back and cries out in pain. Jack and Daniel wake.

Sam; shut it off! Shut it off!

Jack; do it!

Sam (gasping) I saw someone. A dark figure. I think it was Sokar. The pain was...

Marty; I am sorry. The memory technology can provide very realistic sensory recall

Sam; she was tortured... so badly

Marty; I am going to turn it on again, but at a lower setting [so why didn't he do that in the first place?]

He switches it back on

Sam; she was on a ship like this one. They put her in a descent pod. There was... fire all around. It was hard to breath.


Jolinar's POV walking through the tunnels, meeting other damned, entering Bynarr's quarters, Bynarr grinning the Evil Grin, his eyes flashing

Back to Sam

Sam; it's gone. I lost it

Marty; we will arrive soon

Sam; I know, Martouf. I'm sorry. Maybe I'm not going to be able to do this

Marty; you have to

Jack; hey, Marty. A word?

They leave the back area

Jack; you're pushing a little hard don't ya think?

Marty; there is not much time left

Jack; it's her father. She knows the stakes

Marty; if she does not remember Jolinar's method of escape I will not allow any of you to accompany me down to the surface

Jack; why?

Marty; because anyone who goes down there will likely not return.

Jack; but you're gonna go

Marty; I will attempt to locate Selmak and communicate any relevant information to you. You will then return to Vorash and relay it the Tok'ra

Jack; and leave and Jacob down there to, what? Rot?

Marty; with no means of escape...

Jack; alright, first of all, Carter's not going to let you go without her. Secondly, I won't let it happen, and thirdly, Jolinar escaped

Marty; but if Samantha cannot recall how...

Jack; I know, I heard you. And forgive the bravado, but it's been done before. It can be done again

Back at the rear of the ship... Sam is sat, chin resting on a knee. She's not a happy camper. Daniel comes and sits beside her.

Daniel; you going to be OK?

Sam; yeah. It's just so confusing. Images and faces. Fragments of thoughts and feelings... There was a Goa'uld on Netu. Not Sokar. He was... let's just say he was less than attractive. I know his name I just can't find it. And I get this horrible sick feeling when I remember him

Daniel; something happened between him and Jolinar

Sam; something worse than the torture and pain. Something Jolinar never wanted Martouf to find out about

FX shot of the Teltak in normal space, coming round a planet and heading for a red moon


Teal'c; we have arrived at the co-ordinates

Martouf removes the recall device from Sam's temple, and puts it behind her ear

Marty; we must keep the device hidden from any Denizens we encounter. I will keep it on a low setting so you may continue to work through Jolinar's memories as we go. Is that OK?

Sam; yeah, of course

Jack hands Sam her hand gun

Jack; Carter

Marty; Sokar would not send someone down to Netu with weapons

Jack; yeah, so?

Marty; if they are discovered on you the Denizens will know we were not sent by Sokar. We must attempt to blend in the hope that we will be able to move about freely as Denizens

Jack; OK, we'll attempt to blend. But we're not going down there unarmed. So, how do we communicate with Teal'c

Marty; we believe that this device will be able to penetrate the atmosphere

Jack takes it from him

Jack; "we believe"?

Marty; we should be able to speak to Teal'c as long as the ship remains in orbit of the moon

Jack clicks the device a few times to check it's working

They walk into the main area, and Marty prepares the pods. Daniel looks out of the viewscreen

Daniel; that's err... that's still a long way down

Marty; the pods are launched at a great velocity

Daniel; and that's supposed to make me feel better, or...?

Marty; they are equipped with heat dampening shields and anti-gravity wave generators that will slow our descent

Jack; so, smooth sailing all the way, right?

Teal'c; not exactly, O'Neill

They get into the pods.

Teal'c; are you prepared?

Jack; ah, no. Not really.

Teal'c seals the pods and launches them

Teal'c; O'Neill, can you hear me?

Jack; I read you, Teal'c

Teal'c; you are now entering the atmosphere... Colonel O'Neill?

FX shot of the pods going the atmosphere

Inside the ship

Teal'c; O'Neill, can you hear me?


Jack's pod opens and he stumbles out. The place looks like an alien planet from a B-movie: rocks, wind, lots and lots of steam. Expect growling slime monster any time soon. Jack looks around

Jack; Carter? Daniel?

Daniel; over here!

Sam; this way

Jack; let's move

Wide FX shot of B-movie planet/moon Netu with the orbiting planet in the sky

Tunnels filled with steam and burning fires. Slime Monster is obviously out and didn't have time to clean

Jack; well, at least it's a dry heat

Teal'c; Colonel O'Neill, respond

Jack; yeah, Teal'c, we're in one piece. Just hang tight, we'll be in touch

Sam; we should follow this tunnel

Marty; you remember?

Sam; being here has helped. This should led us to the old remains of the underground colony. It's one of the only inhabitable places left

They walk down the tunnel. When Jack gets up we see a human skull on the ground. Slime Monster had lunch first.

end act two>

Lots of fire, dark cavern

Daniel; is it me, or is actually getting hotter?

Jack; little of both I think

m; there's something up ahead At the end of the tunnel we see a larva stream flowing by. Hot!

Sam; this way (indicating to her left)

They walk into a huge cavern which looks out over a kind of underground city thing. Big buildings, lots of fire

Jack; well, it's certainly not Emerald City.

The Munchkins, sorry, the Denizens enter the cavern and surround our intrepid heroes.

Jack; Howdy folks. We're new in these parts. I know it's hard to tell but it's true. Carter?


We see Binar looking extremely ugly, and leering at us. One can only hope he's looking at Rosha, and not us... Change of POV, and big kissage between Rosha and Bynarr

End flashback

Sam; Bynarr.

That gets the Denizen's attention and they start muttering amongst themselves

Daniel; what does that mean?

Sam; it's the name I couldn't remember. (loudly) we've come to see Bynarr

Na'onak; (distorted) who are you?

Jack; people of little consequence, pay no attention to us

Na'onak; kneel before me

Jack; who's this guy?

Some guy; he is Na'onak, first prime to Bynarr, Lord of Netu.

Sam; we've come to see Bynarr

Na'onak; you will not. Banish them to the surface

The Denizens start towards Jack who pulls out his gun.

Jack; I don't think so. Back off a little there, folks

Jack is soon knocked off his feet by a hand device. Sam pulls out her gun and starts shooting. The Denizens grab her.

Bynarr; who asks for me by name?

Sam; I do! I'm Samantha Carter, host of Jolinar of Malkshur

Bynarr; take their weapons. Throw them in the pit.

They are dragged off

Jack; Boys. Pit

The pit

They are thrown in, and we see the trapdoor thing bolted behind 'em. Jen has flashback to kid's TV show she used to watch (Don't you open that trapdoooorrrr, 'cause there's something down there)

Jack; thank you! The smells keep getting' better and better

; so, this doesn't look very encouraging Sam looks round. There are a lot of people huddled against the walls. In the background we can hear distant screams. This is not good.

Daniel; I thought Sokar wouldn't allow weapons. So far we've seen a staff weapon and a hand device

Marty; I don not understand it myself

Jack; surprise, surprise

Sam; Bynarr is Sokar's appointed leader. He is allowed one hand device and one staff weapon for his First prime.

Marty; why did you think Binar would be sympathetic to Jolinar?

Sam; I was sure he was the one who helped her escape

Jack; why?

Sam; she... errr...

Everyone gets the subtext. Rosha did the bad thing with Bynarr

Sam; I'm sorry. Look, he's the key. Bynarr may not have knowingly helped Jolinar, but I'm sure he must know how she escaped

Dad; Sam? Sam?

Sam; (looks over) Dad? (goes over to him) Dad! (softly) Dad...

Dad; am I dreaming?

Sam; no we're real

Dad; are you crazy?

Jack; apparently

Sam; are you OK?

Dad; been better

Marty; Selmak?

Dad; he's dying [errr... Isn't Selmak female?]

Marty; this will help.

Give Dad a little vial of green liquid. Dad drinks a bit then coughs

Sam; hang in there. We're gonna get you out

Jack; Marty...

Daniel takes off his jacket and gives it to Sam who makes Dad a pillow

Sam; thank you

Jack; he gonna make it?

Marty; not here. Unless we get him out of here soon, he will die

Jack looks over to Sam. She runs a hand down Dad's face, relieved he's alive

Sam; (whispers) it's OK


Teal'c is doing whatever he does when he gets abandoned on these ships. Jen wonders if the on-board computer has games. He looks out the window [I spy...] and sees a transport beam go from the moon to the planet.


FX shot of buildings and streets. A cargo ship lands in the foreground

Palace room

Bynarr walks in with some guard, and kneels before Sokar

Bynarr; I am humbled by your presence, my lord Sokar

Sokar; Bynarr, Lord of Netu, I do not have time to hear of the sufferings of the Damned on this day

Binar; allow me to offer thanks for returning the Tok'ra Jolinar, the one who betrayed me, so that I may seek my revenge

Sokar; of what do you speak?

Bynarr; she arrived today with three others

Throughout all this, Sokar's hand has been resting way too close to a candle flame. Yikes! Intrigued by what Bynarr has just said, he pulls it away. Under the hood, the eyes flash. Red, not yellow.

Sokar; I did not send her to you. They are intruders. Find out what they want, then kill them

Bynarr; I had hoped to take my revenge on Jolinar solely, my Lord. To see her suffer in the harshest ways of the Damned

Sokar; go now! Report back to me in one day. Heed my command

Bynarr; without fail my Lord

Sokar; a ship brought these intruders. Find it, and destroy it

Some guard; yes, my Lord

The pit

Dad don't look so good

Marty; do you have the strength to speak?

Dad nods

Marty; we can relay communication to the Tok'ra Council

Dad; Sokar's felt is 10 times larger than we thought. He is poised to attack six system lords. He will win

Marty; he will control an army big enough to rule the galaxy if that is so

Jack; when is all this supposed to happen?

Dad; the attack was due to take place two weeks from the time I was captured. That was 4 days ago

Marty; we must relay this to the Tok'ra immediately

Jack; Teal'c, come in

The ship

I spy with my little eye...

Teal'c; O'Neill, it is I

Jack; we found Jacob, he's in pretty rough shape

Teal'c; have you as yet determined a means of escape

The pit

Jack; err... no. not yet. Martouf wants to talk to you

Marty; Teal'c, I have an important message you must relay to the High Council if we do not get out of here

He is interrupted by the door opening. That's a real door, not the trapdoor. Marty hides out of sight

Neonack; Samantha Carter. You will come with me

Jack; who's calling?

Na'onak; now (points Staff at Jack)

Jack; come and get her yourself you...

Sam; (interrupting his insult) Sir, this may be our only way out here

Jack; how do you figure?

Sam; if I could just get close to Binar, talk to him

Na'onak; move!

Jack; yeah, OK. Go ahead

Sam; look after my Dad

She leaves with Na'onak. Marty finishes talking to Teal'c.


Sam is marched through the cavern, along hallways and into Bynarr's quarters. Na'onak knocks

Bynarr; enter

He opens the door, and shoves Sam inside. He then stands outside the room, leaving the door open a fraction. Bynarr walks round Sam, then over to a table where he pours water into a cup

Bynarr; take it

Sam refuses

Bynarr; you have no symbiote within you

Sam; no

Bynarr; how then do you know of Jolinar?

Sam; I once carried her

Bynarr; I should have known. Jolinar would rather have died on the surface before she faced me

Sam; because she betrayed you?

Bynarr grabs Sam's face

Bynarr; look what Sokar took from me because of her. [I should mention at this point that Bynarr only has one eye. Ick] Where is she now?

Sam; she's dead

Bynarr; you know how she escaped?

Sam; I don't. I don't remember

Bynarr; why did you come here?

The pit

We hear screaming. Dad wakes up

Dad; Sam?

Daniel; she'll be back

Dad; where is she?

Jack; she's with Bynarr

Marty; Samantha believes Bynarr is the key to our escape

Dad; Bynarr is Sokar's eyes and ears

Jack; well, eye anyway

Dad; he ensures there are no uprisings

Jack; keeps the conditions liveable

Dad; and he reports to Sokar regularly. Sokar enjoys hearing about the suffering

Jack; what's that?

Marty; Sokar comes here?

Dad; no. Bynarr goes to the planet

Marty; how do you know?

Dad; I saw him there before I was captured

Daniel; do you know how he gets there?

Dad shakes his head

Bynarr's quarters

Bynarr; our most recent addition is the Tok'ra Selmak. Have you come to rescue him? (he laughs) Did you think I helped Jolinar escape?

Sam; yes

Bynarr; why?

Sam; because you loved her

Bynarr; you are mistaken

Sam; then why do hate her so much?

Bynarr; her death has robbed me of the revenge I have long dreamed of


Rosha leaves Bynarr asleep in the bed, takes a key from round his neck, and activates the rings

End flashback

Sam looks from the control panel to the ceiling where the rings are marked, and thus betrays her thoughts. D'oh!

Bynarr; I won't get the same satisfaction from killing you, but I will get some

Sam; no, wait!

Bynarr raises his hand, and the hand device springs into life. Before he can do anything, a staff blast hits him from behind. He falls to the ground, and with a flash of the eyes, dies. Na'onak stands in the doorway

The pit

Sam is shoved through the door

Jack; you alright?

Sam; Dad?

Jack; hanging in there

Sam; there are transportation rings in Bynarr's quarters

Marty; they must lead to Sokar's place

Sam; once there Jolinar managed to steal a cargo ship and escape

There are a lot of screams from upstairs

Jack; what's goin' on up there?

Sam; Na'onak just killed Bynarr

Jack; what?

Daniel; why?

Sam; I have no idea. Bynarr was about to kill me, Na'onak came in and shot him with a staff weapon. He didn't say a word, he just sent me back down here

Dad; the Denizens will riot

Jack; this could be our shot

Daniel; to do what? The rings lead to Sokar's palace

Jack; hey! It's a way out of here

Sam; Jolinar was one person and she had a hand device

Dad; leave me [nonononononononononono!]

Jack; err, Jacob, you seem to be missing the whole point

Marty; Teal'c

Sam; is that possible?

Jack/Daniel; what?

Sam; the cargo ship has rings

Sam; the cargo ship work like Stargates only over shorter distances. They transport a matter stream. If that matter stream is intercepted...

Jack; (interrupting) whoa! Simplify, please

Sam; if Teal'c can manoeuvre the cargo ship into the correct position theoretically we should be able to transport aboard

Daniel; theoretically?

Jack; how does he find the right position?

Marty; the ring mechanism has sensors that can locate other rings. Teal'c should be able to detect the co-ordinates

Jack; I'll take those odds. (takes out communication device, then to Daniel) C'mere!

end Act Three and Jen discovers she didn't edit this break on her tape>

The ship

Teal'c is attacked by a couple of gliders. He powers

Daniel; Teal'c, it's Daniel, come in.

The pit

Daniel; Teal'c, do you copy?

Teal'c; I do, Daniel Jackson

Daniel; Teal'c, come in, over

The door opens and Some Guy walks in

Some Guy; what are you doing?

Daniel; I'm just communicating with my friend with this little device

Some Guy starts towards Daniel, but gets jumped by Marty (not the Broca sense). Some Guy's mate walks in to see what's happening, and gets kicked by Sam then hit by Jack. Marty kicks Some Guy's ass, then they help Dad out

Daniel; Teal'c, we need you, do you copy?

The ship

Teal'c; I copy [but he's a little distracted by the gliders]

FX shot of the attack


Sam; this way

Daniel; Martouf says the ring device on the ship should be able to locate the path the matter stream will take

Teal'c; I will be in position

Bynarr's quarters

The enter, and Jack barricade the door behind them

Sam; it's gone. The key that activates the rings is gone

Marty; where was the key to be inserted? [I have a few ideas... ;)]

Sam; over here

Marty smashes the ornament thingy so he can have a good look.


The Other Guy from when they first arrived on Netu runs through, followed by a friend. The reach the door

Bynarr's quarters

Marty is playing with the ring activation panel

Jack; can you make it work?

Marty; it will take time

Jack; take all you need


The Denizens are using the door as a punch bag until someone has the better idea of using a pillar as a battering ram. Jen wonders where they got it from, and if another room is falling down now... But then she doesn't care anymore as lots of big, strong, muscular men with pecks that have been chiselled fill the screen. *happy sigh*


Jack looks a little worried. Marty is still working away

Daniel; Teal'c, we're almost ready. Teal'c, do you copy?

The ship

Teal'c is still playing a space version of 'Tig'


Jack; we gotta go

Marty; almost


Jen's big strong men are almost through


Marty; get ready

Daniel; Teal'c!

Jack leaves the door and runs to the ring pad

Daniel; Tealc's not responding

Jack; he said he'd be there, right?

Marty; if he is not...

Jack; he'll be there


Jen's big strong men are still working hard

Na'onak; move away!

They oblige and disappear. Jen not a happy camper. Neonack uses the hand device and blasts it open


Marty; OK

But it's took late. Na'onak and his friends walk in. Jen's big strong men are back too. Happy camper. They surround our heroes.

Other Guy; kneel before Na'onak!

Everyone is forced to their knees

Na'onak; you shall call me Na'onak no longer [I wish to be called Mandy] From this day forth I shall reclaim my rightful name...

He pulls off his headpiece


Not good. And on everyone's stunned reaction, and Apophis' flashing eyes, we get the words.


To be continued...

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carina123 (18:46)

Nouveau sondage sur le quartier Jéricho, n'hésitez pas à venir, merci, Bonne soirée

emeline53 (19:55)

Au programme de ce dimanche soir : nouveau sondage sur Life Unexpected, nouvelle photo de l'épisode pour le retour de The Vampires Diaries + le review pour commenter l'épisode ! On vous attend et le sondage spécial Halloween sur The Fosters est toujours dispo !!

grims (20:09)

Bonsoir tout le monde ! déjà cinq participants pour le concours wallpapers Samain sur le quartier Outlander ! venez vous inscrire et nous faire partager vos talents merci et bonne soirée sur HypnoSeries

grims (20:10)

Et à l'occasion du "Focus sur Nip/Tuck", le quartier relance la photo du mois ! et quoi de mieux que de départager des wallpapers ! alors bon vote !!!

man0n49 (20:56)

Le quartier Chicago Fire a ouvert encore plus ses portes à la série Chicago Med ! N'hésitez pas à venir commenter les épisodes de Chicago Med avec nous et à développer la série sur le quartier ! On vous attend nombreux.

carina123 (21:57)

Nouveaux sondages sur les quartiers Lie to Me et Jéricho, venez nombreux ! Merci, Bonne soirée à tous !

Steed91 (10:35)

Bonjour à tous,

serieserie (11:44)

Concours entre Archers pour Arrow et Robin des Bois, 10 ans du quartier sur Bones, CPDAwards sur Chicago PD, un nouveau jeu dans les forums de Scorpion, les 7 pêchés capitaux sur Lucifer, je vous attend Pas le temps de s'ennuyer!

abeilledic (12:18)

Nouveau débat sur Ma sorcière bien-aimée ^^. Venez nous donner votre avis

albi2302 (17:35)

Une soirée HypnoGame spéciale Halloween, est organisée samedi 29 octobre.
C'est un thème général sur les séries de sorcières, vampires, fantômes, zombies, monstres, horreurs et surnaturels.
Vous avez jusqu'au 26 octobre pour vous inscrire sur le forum

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grims (21:53)

Bonsoir tout le monde ! déjà cinq participants pour le concours wallpapers Samain sur le quartier Outlander ! venez vous inscrire et nous faire partager vos talents merci et bonne soirée sur HypnoSeries

grims (21:54)

Et à l'occasion du "Focus sur Nip/Tuck", le quartier relance la photo du mois ! et quoi de mieux que de départager des wallpapers ! alors bon vote !!!

chrismaz66 (08:04)

Je sors aussi mes DR. HOUSE Venez découvrir chaque jour les réponses au jeu 1 personnage = 1 animal, et venez en discuter si vous n'êtes pas d'accord ou bien oui! Et venez rire avec nous! Nice Day

albi2302 (11:20)

Une soirée HypnoGame spéciale Halloween, est organisée samedi 29 octobre.
C'est un thème général sur les séries de sorcières, vampires, fantômes, zombies, monstres, horreurs et surnaturels.
Vous avez jusqu'au 26 octobre pour vous inscrire sur le forum

carina123 (17:58)

Bonjour à tous ! * Sondages sur quartiers Lie to Me et Jéricho, venez, Merci !

emeline53 (21:45)

Le concours Freeform est toujours en place ! Les quartiers PLL, Shadowhunters, Baby Daddy et The Fosters (entre autres !!) vous attendent pour participer au quizz et/ou au concours de wallpapers bonne soirée !

carina123 (09:46)

Le calendrier du quartier Lie to Me pour le mois de novembre est déjà posté !, n'hésitez pas à venir pour les sondages des quartiers Lie to Me et Jéricho, Bonne journée à tous !

Locksley (12:16)

Il vous reste quelques jours pour départager les cartes de notre concours HypnoDesign Halloween. Pensez à aller voter et à commenter les créations, ça fera plaisir aux participants ! Bonne journée !

albi2302 (17:14)

Plus que quelques heures pour vous inscrire à la partie HypnoGame spécial Halloween de samedi !
Pour plus d'informations, rendez-vous sur le forum.

DGreyMan (23:28)

Vous l'attendiez tous (au moins quelques uns, en tout cas) : le sondage nouveau du quartier Game of Thrones vient d'arriver ! Merci d'avance au futurs votants et gros poutous au futurs commentateurs ^^

serieserie (11:03)

On approche des derniers jours pour participer au grand concours des Archers de la citadelle avec Arrow et Robin des bois!! Allez allez on s'inscrit et vite sinon, prenez gare aux flèches perdues!

serieserie (11:04)

Et nouveauté chez les #OneChicago!! Un grand concours vient d'être mit en place, deux façons de participer dont une totalement inédites venez vite vous renseigner sur les quartiers Chicago PD et Chicago Fire
(et parce que ça fait longtemps, un petit convois)

grims (11:30)

Hello tout le monde ! déjà cinq participants pour le concours wallpapers Samain sur le quartier Outlander ! venez vous inscrire et nous faire partager vos talents merci ! et n'oubliez pas notre photo de la quinzaine !

grims (11:31)

Et à l'occasion du "Focus sur Nip/Tuck", le quartier relance la photo du mois ! et quoi de mieux que de départager des wallpapers ! alors bon vote !!!

man0n49 (13:30)

Super concours d'écriture sur CF et CPD ! n'hésitez pas à vous inscrire, vous avez un mois pour écrire vos OS à très vite !

CastleBeck (17:14)

En plus de la photo du mois , il y a un nouveau sondage sur Nip/Tuck, venez voter, ça prend 3 secondes (environ) !

ptitebones (17:50)

Coucou ! L'édito a changé sur le quartier NCIS, j'attends vos avis ! De plus, vous pouvez venir départager les meilleurs slaps, dans la photo du mois (qui est encore un gif du mois ^^) Merci, pour vos futurs passages ! Bonne fin de journée !

grims (22:15)

Bonsoir tout le monde ! le concours wallpapers Samain vous attend sur le quartier Outlander ! venez vous inscrire et nous faire partager vos talents merci ! et n'oubliez pas notre photo de la quinzaine !

grims (22:18)

Et à l'occasion du "Focus sur Nip/Tuck", le quartier relance la photo du mois et vous propose un tout nouveau sondage merci de faire un petit détour !!!

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